Creative Sample 1

Essay Prompt

Your Space is your opportunity to allow the Committee on Admission to learn something about you that you have not addressed in another section of the application. Your Space is entirely optional. If you choose to include a Your Space submission, be sure it is labeled with your name, high school, and date of birth. Due to the volume of submissions, we will be unable to return your work. Please do not send anything that is irreplaceable.

Sample Essay

Where I'm From*

I am from shin-guards

From Tide and OxiClean.

I am from the black pebbles in my bed.

(Dark, rubber,

they followed me like an old friend.)

I am from the Bermuda grass

the Synthetic turf

whose plastic blades burned my skin as if I slid on fire.

I am from kangaroo leather and cotton socks,

from Diadora and Select.

I'm from the Division 1's

and the ODP's.

From Goal-side! and Second Ball!

I'm from greatness has no peak

fear leaves with the pain,

and intimidation is vassal for weakness.

I'm from the Washington Area Girls Soccer League,

in injury and in health.

from the shredded ACL's

to the grade three concussions,

the shin splints turned stress fractures.

In my closet there is a drawer

a cornucopia of old jerseys,

an aperture of my past

their lessons stay with me.

I am from those colors-

they fuel me for my greatest competition-

The tournament of life.

*inspired by and adapted from the poem, "Where I'm From", by George Ella Lyon

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