Activity Sample 2

Essay Prompt

Tell us about a job, community service, or other experience that made an impact on you. Be sure to describe the impact it left on you.

Sample Essay

Last summer, I landed an internship that gave me the opportunity to do field testing of environmental equipment measuring air pollution. The results blew my mind; the science was incontrovertible. Our local air was terrible because of the emissions from cars. It was the final proof I needed that cars have to be reinvented in the 21st century. Our planet depends on it.

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